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Finding the story behind the habit

Brainstorming

Personal statement
Session notes

“What do people already know you for — and what does it say about who you are?”
Starting question from our first session

A Raw memories

  • Coach yelling “MATZ!” across the cafeteria Opening?
  • Lemon squares with a jam smiley face
  • Teachers & friends call me “The Baker”
  • Sugar cookie house — used trig for the walls
  • Sand-textured icing, rock-hard sourdough
  • Treats on the Tri-M agenda = more people come
  • Vegan batch for the few who need it
  • Polvorones with a friend / teaching him babka
  • List every recipe I’ve ever made
  • “Baking has always been my passion…”

Too many → pick the ones that show people.

B Three threads

Self

The kitchen scientist

Chemistry, trig, curiosity — and laughing at failures.

Others

Baking as an invitation

Club treats, the vegan batch: “I made these for you.”

Cultures

A bowl as a passport

Polvorones from Mexico, babka & my Jewish heritage.

These three = the thesis sentence!

C Story arc

  1. 01Scene: “MATZ!” in the cafeteriaOpen in motion, not summary
  2. 02Who I am: “The Baker”Thesis — self, others, cultures
  3. 03Self: engineer & investigator
  4. 04Failures, with humor
  5. 05Others: club treats, vegan batch
  6. 06Cultures: a trip without leaving
  7. 07Return to the coachBookend the opening scene
  8. 08One-line ending

↑ start & end with the lemon squares

Core
insight

It isn’t really about baking. It’s about connection.

← make this the last line